Magazines assessment learner response'

 1) Type up your feedback in full (you don't need to write the mark and grade if you want to keep this confidential).

total:10 , grade:2

WWW: you start well but this tails off badly and overall this needs to be a lesson in the expected standards of written English, presentation and focus on the question.

EBI: Written English and presentation not up to GCSE  standards in this assessment. Needs to be a priorty to work on.

2) Read the mark scheme for this assessment carefully. Write down the mark you achieved for each question:

Q1: 2/2
Q2: 3/12 
Q3: 3/6

Q4: 2/8

3) Did you get any media terminology wrong in the assessment? Make a note of it here for future revision: 

No i just need to revise magazine CSPs

                                                                                                                                      
4) Look specifically at question 2 - pick out three points from the mark scheme that you didn't include in your analysis of the unseen Grazia magazine cover. 

colour scheme and what they represent, images , connotations.

5) Now look at question 4. Use the mark scheme to identify three points you could have made regarding how Tatler reflects British social and cultural values. 

i could've mentioned power and money, beauty standards and social class.